*can't really find the right words*

that's . . . wow, Mari-chan. Just . . . wow.....

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fear the wrath *click click click . . .*

This is probably my favorite of your poems. Everyting flows and the ideas that are so well pronounced in the poem end up weaving themselves into the reader's mind. Very cool.

As always, I critique though... there are some spelling mistakes that could be fixed...

I would soar
I would fly through the air
Barely scaping my wings on the trees
*Barely scraping my wings on the trees*
Watching the snow tumble down
As I exscape
*As I escape*

I know
I wouldn't think of you
I know your too selfish
*I know you're too selfish*
And you would expect me to

You let go too
And you probally flew away
*And you probably flew away*

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Those were the ones I saw.

Also, for rhythm's sake, I'd change this:
I will, however, keep a special place for you
In my heart
Because I will always know
That it was you who set me free

To this:
I will, however, keep a special place
For you in my heart
Because I will always know
That it was you who set me free


Though maybe that's just my pickyness kicking in....

wow thanks! Don't worry, I never correct myself on grammar or any spelling things while writing. I don't know why... I guess I never devolped that habbit. I like to write what I want when I comes to my mind. I know how to spell and all that but I guess it's just a thing of mine. I'm really glad you like the poem! and I accept your corrections happily. thanks again!
^_^

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